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Hi. I read your story in 2 days ;)
It's actually very good. Hope you continue it.

Just found this story, and read it in one day. I love the story and I hope you can eventually get around to finishing it. Haven't seen many dbz fics like this and I think its really good. I was skeptical at first to read it but now I fell in love. Hope you update soon.

Yaaaaaaay!!! You updated!!! :D Oh no, Yamcha found out! >< Eh, it had to happen eventually. I was even expecting it. :) And of course, the angstyness has to come into play some time. Ooooo I'm excited. x) Has it been two weeks or so already? O.o I guess it has...can't remember when you said that you would update again, hehe. Anyways, glad you did. ^^

Well, of course! 'Tis a good story. :) Well, I knew he was thinking it. :p However, I'm surprised he's not going to take him away from Yamcha. Patience must run in the family, hehe. Oh, okay. I guess you can go ahead and e-mail it to me, since you've got it written and all. Who knows, maybe I'll get my inspiration back from it. However, my writing is a bit different now, so it might not be the same. :/ Although, I hope to make it better. ^^ Oh and my e-mail is ctechnoslave18@aol.com...I hope everyone doesn't start e-mailing me now. ><

Oh, that old thing? I actually noted that I wasn't going to update that one anymore. Honestly, I didn't think anyone was into it anymore, but seeing that there is, I'll see what I can do. You know what, that would actually be a good idea. O.o Since I'm not any good at lemons and yet I don't want to exclude them, hehe...but like I said, we'll see what I can come up with if anything at all. I had some ideas going for it when I was still writing it, but I can't remember them...surely I wrote them down somewhere. >.> Well, since you told me a little about the story, I don't know if I want to read it. :/ Sounds a little hardcore for me hehe. And I don't know if I like the idea of any of my fav dbz characters getting chopped up. However, there were a couple stories I read where something similar happened to Gohan and Vegeta, whom I love. :( They actually made me cry. >< Those authors are ruthless. I believe they're in my recommended list...and why I would recommend them, I don't know. :/ Anyway, I wonder if Tien will take advantage of Vegeta? O.o And what will Yamcha do if he does? >< I know you. It's gonna happen. :p Well, either that or Kakarot will come to the rescue. Ugh, now I don't know what's gonna happen! ><

Oooo they kissed, glad they each conquered their demons, now comes the secret liasons without Yancha knowing :) Is Tien interested too?

I loved this chapter! I cnt wait to see what happens next. I'm also looking forward to reading ur other stories! Huge fan!! :D Keep up the great work!

Thank you, Kiki. Was about to say the same thing...except you know more on the subject, both you and the author apparently, hehe. Although, there's really no such thing as true or false beliefs, since they are merely beliefs and/or opinions. :/ Don't hate me if I'm wrong; I'm not good with arguments. >< Anyway, that seemed like a short chappie. :o Not much happened...at least Kakarot's staying there, but he should've said that he'd do it for a price so he wouldn't give himself away, but then again, I guess it'd sound wrong to Vegeta. :/ Any chapter now, I'm waiting for Vegeta to slip up and speak English when something surprising happens or something and Yamcha will be outraged. Hehe, outraged. Did you know back in the horse and buggy days, outraged meant raped? ...I don't know why that's funny or why I felt the need to tell you that, but the urge hit and now you know...or already knew. >.> I put dots when I'm unsure of things and don't know when to shut up when I'm excited. O.o So...*jumps up and down in seat* what's gonna happen next? :D

Glad they are going to be living in the same house now - well stables is next to the house. Much easier access :)

I understand now why Yamcha is being so nice to Vegeta, but I still fear he could snap if he suspects Vegeta and Kakarot are getting closer.

I'm so happy u updated! I cnt wait to read what happens! :D