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So Kakarot is coming to terms with it, questioning his beliefs. Good for him but will he act on them more.

Now that was strange, Yamcha leaving Vegeta alone, whats he up to, nothing good I bet.

Nice to read Vegeta not minding the fact that he likes Kakarot even though he's male.

Ugh, I despise them bible pushers. Yeah, how do they know their religion is the right one? Either that or it just comforts people to turn to their God in their time of need...which is selfish if you ask me. >.> Woa, better not start one of those conversations. O.o Anyway...^^' seems like Yamcha is still trying to get on Vegeta's good side. I like how he's taking his time with him. :) It kinda worries me how much turmoil Kakarot is in over this, but then again, getting to know yourself is kind of scary. O.o

What a horrible crowd that Vegeta was dragged through, did they really act that way in olden days, and allowing children to join in too :(

Glad Kakarot could not go through with it with that women. Prehaps her will now realise how much Vegeta means to him and accept he's gay.

Poor suicidal Vegeta, though he did decide to live at the end but seems very despondant.

Thought Nappa sounded like a pirate, hehe :)

This is an underappreciated gem. You have a unique storyline, wonderful descriptions, exciting settings and an amazing, relatable take on the characters. I’m also impressed by how much of their personalities you’ve subtly incorporated from the show, which can be difficult in any fanfiction, especially an AU. Vegeta is feisty, but the safety of his people weighs on him. Goku is determined to protect, but seems naive about just of the right method to do so. And Yamcha is a deliciously interesting pervert. I’m on tenterhooks to see hold this adventure will unfold.

great chapter.

So they have arrived. Nice to see Vegeta decide to be savage and no doubt cause Yamcha hassle :) Hope Kakarot can persuede him that he needs to teach Vegeta more, but I'm still not sure how he is going to eventually rescue him.

this story is getting interesting. update soon.

Ooh their first kiss and Vegeta responded so he must have liked it :) Glad he opened up to him and hope Kakarot can conquer his demons and find a way to free Vegeta.

Poor confused Vegeta being forced to enjoy the experience with Yamcha, hope Kakarot can get him to open up to him, but he is wracked by thoughts of himself liking him :(

Yay! Back to this story! :D Oh my gosh, the moment I've been waiting for! X) I have a sick sense of taste, muhahahaha O.o So, is Yamcha just going to force the alcohol down Vegeta's throat? O.o Or will he offer it to him? I doubt he'll drink it willingly...hmm, I guess we'll see. :) Hehe you have Piccolo down perfectly. ^^ I guess if anyone was as wise as him, they'd see a human's emotions pathetic as well. x) *bounces in seat with impatience for the next chapter* :3