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Hi,

I love the way this story is unfolding. So, now only Kakarot can understand Vegeta? IN-teresting...
I can't wait to read what happens next!

--Falcon

What a different story! I like savage Vegeta but worry now how bad Yamcha will be to him.

Yay! A longer chapter! :D But I was disappointed when it ended, hehe. I practically read every paragraph and sentence twice to make it longer. >< Oh, no! Vegeta forgot to return to the mountain! :o However it seems like things won't change much. I'm glad something good will come at the end after Vegeta endures through all the misery he's supposed to experience. And Kakarot's already suspicious. O.o Maybe he'll help out the little native sooner than I expected. :D But knowing how you write your stories, it probably won't be that easy. :p I'm glad no one was hurt and Vegeta went with them willingly. ^^ Now i'm eager to know how he'll adjust to the city. O.o Very good job so far. ^^ Always eager for more of your stories. :)

Oh my gosh, I was so glad you skipped that part with Yamcha and Krillen in the last chapter hehe. ^^' Was freaking out for a moment. They finally met, yay! The story continues to get interesting. Well, it's a good thing Yamcha's willing to woo Vegeta and not take him forcefully. Though, I have a feeling that that might happen anyway. After all, why would Vegeta have a vision being tied to a bed? O.o I guess it could be someone else. The more I read the more excited I get. ^^ It keeps me guessing in what is going to happen. Eager for more. X)

Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.

This is a lot like Pocahontas, except a bit different hehe. It has much potential for the unknown and I'm so excited that something like this has finally made it's way to the yaoi world! x) Well, there is a similar one, but it wasn't finished. >< You'll finish, won't you? :o I hope you do. :) Yamcha has peaked my interest. I feel sorry for any native that gets taken by him. >< Hell I feel sorry for anyone who sleeps with him hehe. Sorry he's a disappointing character in the series. Anyway, I hope Kakarot will do something to prevent the destruction of the land and since he's learning their language, something good must come from it. :)