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September 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hi, i love fma and your story is really well written but if i could give two points; firstly i think using "roughly" instead of rough might read better when talking about his fingers in the beginning. Also you spelt canine wrong. :) keep writing!
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September 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
'lips pressed on the tip of the nipple rather rough'- i think using roughly would read better ^-^ winry is my favourote character!!