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wow, this is really incredible, it's well written :D

Aaaaaahhh I wasn't going to review because I don't want to be one of those annoying reviewers that doesn't know when to stop reviewing, but I had to! >< I'll admit though, this is a little better than the previous one. Potat and Yam, lol. Way to stick with the puns. ^^ I tried coming up wit other names for Saiyans as well, but for some reason couldn't think of any. :/ I just needed to think of other vegetables, hehe. I also like Raditz's part in the story. He didn't really have a voice in the last, but it's good to know that he's trying to help Vegeta. :) Woa, so Kakarot's a schizo, huh? That's craziness! X) It makes his character that more out of control and unpredictable. O.o Makes me wonder if Kakarot will die so easily knowing that his mind works this way. Of course, we don't really know how strong he is either...except he's an elite. :/ Anyway, hopefully Brolly comes to the rescue...eventually :p and Vegeta is more accepting when he shows. :o

cruel cruel kakarot, hee, even though kakarot is an evil bastard in this, i can't bear that kakarot got killed though, oh well, it was still amazing though & you did a very beautiful job in this , keep it up :D