rate_review Reviews

Of course I want lemons - you know that. :P

Doesn't matter though, I think this was an awesomely simplistic way to end this portion of this lovely story.

Not saying you have to write more; you certainly left it open for our imaginations to take over from here. :)

Thank you! And I do look forward to more DBZ stories from you! :D

I read the first chapter....nice! I could actually visulize the scene in my mind. I must say it sounds out of character for those two to get all hot and steamy so suddenly but wonderfully brillaint, we'll just blame it on Saiyen instincts. Heh heh. Great job and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your chapters.

Another great Chapter C; looking forward to reading more. I liked how the two saiyens were relaxed to just stare up at the moon.

Nice one...I laughed thinking about Videl catching Gohan in his naughty act while looking at the moon. Heh heh, and the ending was awesome. I hope they fight a little in the next chapter. I'm looking forward to it C:

Wonderful! I loved that scene where they were together in the rain. It was...Amazing! Although I wonder if their wives are going to find out. *pout* I really don't approve of cheating and that's the only thing that is irking me a little about this story. But its so wonderfully written i can't stop reading it so wonderful job!!

Passionate kiss....wow....if I could be kissed like that...Ah my lover aint much into kissing *shruggs* Oh well. Anyway great story by the way looking forward to the next part.

Gohan becoming the dominant partner was a shock - and a nice surprise. Apparently Vegeta also thought it was a nice surprise as well. I wonder what the prince would have thought if Gohan had actually went with his instincts and bit him instead of settling for a hickey?

Then the switch! :D haha! Vegeta dragging him to the end of the bed was fun. :P And the rest was just as fun!

Lovely set of lemons here! :)

I love it the lemon scene was so hot. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

I really, really thought they were going to go at it on the desk and then Bulma was going to come and find out what was taking Gohan so long to get to the lunch and find them. Thank GOODNESS that didn't happen! :D I'm very relieved all that happened was a very passionate kiss. It shows a different depth to their relationship than just a series of one-timers. I like the dynamic.

Interestingly we get to see Gohan's POV on this. Will we see more of Vegeta's POV? Or is that a save until the end sort of moment?

You might start a subject for this story in the AFF forum. Then I could hound you with questions (and poke you for more tidbits) and you could deliver answers between updates. :)

ahh awesome stuff, i really think you're doing an amazing job on this fic, and you should keep it up :D