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Lovely point this --> And after those agonizing twenty-five hours with the Elder Kai what was he doing with his life?? Meetings, reports, lab experiments, typing himself to death on his laptop...

I totally agree.

I hope you don't take it amiss, but one of these days I may just post a chapter of a G/Gh story that I've spent way too long on.

The reason I mention it is because it's sex in the rain, and I didn't want you to think that I'd copied this beautiful chapter.

I'm glad I'm not the only one to think Gohan + rain...and that it usally leads somewhere in the lemon direction.

I was wondering how their first time together would be, and I like the fact it wasn't fucking or making love. This happy 'coupling' moment somewhere in the middle. :D

I love this. Please tell me you will be posting new chapters soon!! lol

mmmmmm, that was very hot indeed :D

I like chapter two. It has a simple lulling/camaraderie quality. Granted, I like it when two saiyans go all animalistic on each other, but a slow build up is nice. :)

*sputters* It's a good thing Gohan feels calm at the moment. :P Otherwise I'd be accusing you of UST. :P

:D What more could a fangirl ask for? Other than the next chapter?

And still no words. I like it.

You wanted to know how you were doing? *Gives it a big THUMBS UP!* :D Lovely. I like the fact they didn't feel that anything need be said after this chapter. :)