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Loved the happy ending after all they had been through. Another great story by you, looking forward to many more :)

Very intense saga. I am wipeing the tear from my eye. You have rendered me speechless. Absolutely epic story.

Awe I'm so happy! But yet sad this story has come to an end. It was a really great read. Lots of emotion and adventure. Looking forward to more stories that you have to offer in the future.

Thanks for a great time!

I was almost afraid to read this chapter!

Thank goodness for the Pheonix, though it was bittersweet in the end at least Vegta won't suffer anymore.

Only one body found, is there still hope?

Omg! I was about to flame you for killing Goku...again! >< I honestly don't see a happy ending here. :/ However, it's good that Vegeta is no longer owned by the 'Dragon.' I knew it. :) I knew it had something to do with the Phoenix and the Dragon, but I didn't know that Vegeta was supposed to be with the Phoenix. Aww, just think what the life they could've had. Curse that Dragon! He had his way forever and the Phoenix finally got his revenge on him. Oh, but there's one more chapter. *sighs* Too bad. You should make a sequel in what should've happened. :) But I know you've got like...ten other stories that you're working on, hehe. Man, and I was listening to that song that you recommended on your latest story while I read that so it made it even more...rememorable. Anyways, that was a quick update. ^^ Hope your others are just as quick, of course I shouldn't get my hopes up like that hehe.

Wow oh wow. You have outdone yourself. I can see the dramatic scene from my eyes. It is a resolution and closure to all the suffers. Goku finally show his true color. I am so happy everything comes together. It is a brilliant story. An epic.

Oohh, you finished! I am so glad this is done. I so look forward to next chapter! Will goku come and will this again be a sad departure. I love the way you describe their desperation. To be honest, I woul love to read a complete story before start another one, so ya I am very happy you did not drop this. Happy new year to you too!

I really hoped they would get away but it seems they are doomed, so sad, please say there is a way out of this :(

I love it love it lovely love it. Love the talk in the elevator. Forever meet but never be together. This is so sweet and heartbreaking. Romantic to the core. Look forward to the update!

Aws, I'm sorry to hear that. :o I was wondering what was taking you so long hehe. That's what I've been doing too. Saving all my stuff on a hard drive because I'm gonna get a new comp this weekend. :) Hopefully. That's the plan anyway. >.> Omg, why did you stop it there?! >< To torture us, that's probably why, no? Or to guess the ending? O.o So, was that what Piccolo was talking about? Immortals feeling pain? Insanity? 'Cause...that's just diabolical. :/ And...what was he referring to about the moon? Is that where he came from? I can't help but think that it's somehow related to the beginning of the first story, where the Phoenix was defeated by...the dragon? O.o I can't remember! >< Been awhile. But yeah, is it? Is it? :o I need the ending here. Ugh! Now I know what Vegeta went through! It's maddening! >< And I don't want it to end, but sadly, all good stories must. :(