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by Vegetaswriter

schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, i really love the darkness of this, it's truly amazing :D
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked the Raditz/Vegeta video. ^^ It was different because you also had parts of the series in it. There were times whenever I watched some of those scenes and I'd giggle because I'd relate them to yaoi. x) The song that went with it was good too. Aw, the Broly/Vegeta video...the song went with it so well! Even more so than Spark in the Abyss, but it's still good no matter where you put it. :) The only problem with it is that some of the doujinshi (I don't know if I spelled that right) is in Japanese. :( Although, most people put that in their videos, it's still kinda frustrating because I can't tell what they're saying. >< Still, I believe it was your best video. :) And the last video was okay. Not my favorite one, but it was alright. I guess the only problem with all of these is that some of the images can't be made out very well. :/ Now, I've never made an amv or anything buuuuut...if possible, is there any way you can make 'em better? At least for future videos anyway. I don't know how you upload them, but I would think you could put them in a photo program or something and tinker with the image. These are just thoughts...I don't know much of anything when it comes to amv's, but they are something that I've considered doing. I hope you keep at it. :) I think you did well for someone who's new at it. ^^ Probably better than I ever will too, hehe. But, you know what they say...practice makes perfect. :)

Oh and this second chapter went really well. Now we know what happened when Kakarot came out. I was kinda surprised though that you continued with this, but then again, I can't blame you. :) It's one of your darkest yet. x) Now that you wrote the second chapter, I hope you do continue with this. No pressure though...after all you have three other stories that you're writing...or more. :/ This story has many insane possibilities, but I know you'll come up with something that I haven't even thought of. ;) Good luck. ^^
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
By the way I wrote that last review. >.> I guess I took too long when I posted it and it came out 'anonymous.' :/
person Zofo
schedule August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh that was delightful :) Any chance of a sequel?
schedule July 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahh very very dark yet sexy, i love this :P
schedule July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
O.o ....Now, that's a tentacle story! :D

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