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for Pizza Perfection

by Deb

person Rez
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haha, Heero's such a smart-ass. I have to say, I've never read another author with as many creative lube's before. I know that this one was specifically requested, but still. Do you have a spread sheet (haha, I'm a dork) on lubes used/requested/in the works/unviable? Somehow I could just imagine that. Or a scene with pretend ShenLong: head tilt at computer, muttering "what haven't I used...honey, no no used that...salad dressing? Nah, that's been done. Oh, I know, egg whites!" pretend ShenLong then proceeds to base an entire fic around lube ideas. End scene.

If that's actually what happens, I would laugh super hard.

Well, I enjoyed the pizza teasing, and Duo's crushing on the sexy-in-spandex. Although, I think Duo should have had a few soda's on hand for the pre-tease session. Otherwise, more than satisfactory.

Keep typin'

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