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Whatever happened with ChiChi? Did she come with them or stayed behind? How did she take Goku and Vegeta's relationship?

Vidal didn't seem to be mentioned after they arrived on the new planet....

I was kinda surprised that the others (Yamcha, Krillin, Tien, Roshi, etc) didn't see Goku and the others off. Unless that was off scene.

Did Bulma give them other tech as well? Armor? Communication? One might think she'd send them with something so that she could keep updated on how things were going and so that if Earth ever needed help again and vice versa, they could contact each other for help...

It sounds like there might be a sequel but can't be sure... I sure hope there is.

Hi sorry for posting this here, I couldn't find your contact anywhere. I have already finished the story actually. You can find it at fanfiction.net under my name arvan82.

While I appreciate your opinion, I sense I must have struck a chord with you since you had nothing else to say but that you despised Thelel, and you think that they are all swingers. They are far from swingers, but I'm not sure explaining things to you would help, there's something bothering you internally I have trouble reaching from here.

Let it go.

the Thelel stuff was rather disgusting. why would goku allow her to touch and undress him when goku didn't even know what was going on? in this AU people in relationships can have sex with whoever they want- you just got done saying how much she liked piccollo and now she's having a 3 way with 2 other men.

DISGUSTING

I wanted to thank everyone who has read (who reads) and especially those who review my story. One review in particular I wanted to reply to, the person who said, "That's it?!" as i suspect there are others who wonder at where i left it off.

I cannot say whether or not i will write again, based on this story or otherwise, but to clarify the idea in my head for the theme of this otherwise obvious story I would like to note that Goten and Trunks' relationship wasn't the point of the ending. It is more a comparison to the complications of the relationship between Goku and Vegeta, and the thought that they will have to learn, just as everyone does, how to be honest with themselves first, and foremost, and how to communicate their needs, wants, etc. How to love, how to let go, how to fight for what you care about most, and how to admit those things. The story is themed, overall, and while I do enjoy T/Go and I have toyed with adding random chapters of instances unseen within the story (such as what Goku and Gohan were doing for a whole week) whether or not I will remains up in the air. I hope this explanation made some sense and gives some understanding.

Chapter 28 - I think you wrapped it up nicely, with a possible opening if you want to continue with another story after this. Things aren't left unfinished, but open to our imagination, which is kind of like DBZ itself, and allows for us to write fanfiction in the first place! :)

I'm glad you FINALLY got Gohan and Von together, and that Gohan 'suggested' Von bite him first. With the difference in power, that was an awesome gesture.

I was totally NOT expecting the Thele and Piccolo pairing. Curious to how that will work, so I'll let me imagination run with it. :P

Goku/Vegeta/Thele - I'm glad the picked her to be a mom to their children. Makes me wonder if she'll have twins the first time, or of they'll have to do this again if they want more heirs/childern. Hot, all the same! :P

The Trunks/Goten ending is what makes me think there could be another chapter or two in an offlet of this one, if you wanted. There's some issues there that obviously need to be hashed out, but again, characters will do what characters will do, and sometimes muses stop at the oddest places.

thank you for the best story of 2012 (IMO), even though it ran into 2013! :)

Chapter 27 - I was wondering how you were going to handle Goku's and Vegeta's discrepancies that happened while they were away from each other. That went smoother than expected! :) I'm excited about them getting to the new planet!

Chapter 25 - Well, I'm glad Gohan sort of sorted his feelings out about what happened, at least as far as Piccolo is concerned. Hopefully he won't feel too bad when he finds out Goku's reasons.

:D YAY, Goku and Vegeta are back on Earth!

Chapter 26 - everything is coming along so nicely!

Great story I appreciate the read. I don't like the fact that the story is over but it was great to enjoy while it last.