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Chapter 24 - I should have known! I didn't have to wait for Vegeta to get to Earth. Goku went to him first!!! I was a wonderful reunion, btw. :D YAY, Lemons!!! I didn't even know I was missing them until I read them. I'm glad things were so easily sorted out by their new bonding. That's a two way street though.

Whow! I didn't realize Dunduil would go after Bulma! I thought Trunks would be able to save her, but Thele did instead.

I'm interested to see how the fight between Von and Dunduil ends.

Chapter 23

Gah! So far behind! I want Vegeta to get back to Earth NOW!!! I kind of sort of wanted Gohan and Von to have more lemons/limes, but I guess the honeymoon period is over. :(

I missed not seeing Piccolo's POV in this Chapter

Awww the last chapter...we all knew it would get there...but it was just so sudden. >< ...but nontheless fantastic. :) That threesome was steamy and I always found Von and Gohan an adorable couple. ^^ I'm so happy they're finally together. However, it sounds like there's unfinished business with Goten and Trunks. O.o Is there gonna be a sequel? Nah, if there were, you probably would of mentioned it. Anyway, it was a terrific read and I'm glad you wasted the time to write it and I don't regret wasting the time to read it. :) I'm curious to see what else is up your sleeve, but I guess we'll see what happens. I'd add you to my recommended list (I think I said I would already, but this damn site changed so much I don't know how O.o) if this site weren't retarded. However, you are in my list in my mind...if that makes you feel...happy. >.> Anyway...its amazing how much this story progressed! At first, I thought it was gonna be like other stories...kinda predictable and the chapters short, but then it got more creative and hot and steamy and the chapters took me an hour to read. ^^ ...not because I'm a slow reader though, because I gotta reread every other sentence in every chapter. O.o So anyway, I'm glad I kept up with you and hope to see from ya again. :)

That's the ending??? Seriously???

What a hot and sexy final chapter!! And what was with Trunks and Goten? Does this mean you are thinking of a sequel? Please?? Overall, one of my favorite a/u stories ever. Thank you for the great ride!

Another fantastic chapter! The interaction between Von and Vegeta is great! And then having Gohan listen in…..yes!! Your story is definitely on the top of my list for fanfics. I love the details, the plot, the exposition….everything is so well thought out. I am sorry to hear you might not be writing for awhile but I understand that life is life and we have to move on with it. If you do write, I will definitely read ;-) Looking forward to the final chapters! Thanks for the updates!!

This is close to the end things are now starting to get good. Do videl have a sexual relationship with Von if not she is getting the raw end of the deal.
So Trunks gave up on his crush on Gohan a little part of me wanted to see that but maybe there's hope now for Goten. Why do it seems now that they
love there mates more than their wives. Is Goku going to help Goten out also. I can't wait to read more from you.

Honestly, other than the SCREAMING lack of ANY sex (lol), it was another really great chapter. I'm so happy that Vegeta is getting the opportunity to rule his people as their king! He so deserves to be happy, and having his legacy restored just may do the trick, besides now being mated to Goku..being king is just an added, extra bonus, lol!
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Hello there! Thank you once again for magnificent chapter. Finally they're at home ! What a pity that you're story is coming to an end. I hope to read more your work in the future.Do you plan to reveal the true about what happened to Vegeta with Fronshir ? Because I really hope so. A little more drama would be interesting "Grand Finale" ; )

Thank you for the random, hot Saiyan sex! Happy New Year!!!!