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Yay! Vegeta is back and he is acting like a King already. Happy New Year!

I love love LOVED this chapter! The interactions of even the side characters were great. Thanks for the early Christmas gift!

Omg! This. Just, omg...this chapter was FANTASTIC!! It's just, well, eeeeeeeeeeee!!!
Worth the wait? You're damned right! So much loving, lusty, juicy sex..mmmm, mmmm, mmmm..daaayum, lol.
Now, for Von to rip Dunduils throat out, since Vegeta isn't here to do it, would be very fitting, indeed...pwease?!
This has been a very exciting, and VERY much appreciated early Christmas gift, and I thank you, so very much..
Until your next update, my friend..may YOUR holidays be as delicious as you've made mine!
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Omk...I'm so excited! Eeeeeeeeeeeeee! Let the games begin!
I am anxious over whatever evil Dunduil is planning to use Bulma for...or, is it Trunks that will suffer from the damage? Well, whatever he's planning, I'm certain that he will not be successful in his efforts. No matter what, or who, it involves...Vegeta will make him pay. Or, Goku..and, it WILL be painful, lol.
Haha, you were right..I LOVE this chapter! Thank you!
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OMG!!! Goku is going to see Vegeta again!! I have only one thing to say. Please, write faster !! I need to know what will happen!

What a cliff hanger!!! What will their first meeting in years be like? Will there be shouting? Love? Tears? AH!!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Chapter 22

I'm glad Piccolo and Gohan had their talk, although I'm not certain it resolved everything. At least they are on talking terms. I was curious as to how you were going to handle Gohan and Videl, and I see that isn't all the way worked out either, but it went differently than I thought it was going to.

I wish Goku had taken the time to talk to Von about the bite he gave to the other sayian. I'm glad Von is going to double check to make sure Goku is the one that bit him.

Vegeta's introspection makes me uncomfortable, but then, I guess he's got a lot to think about and isn't anywhere near Earth. A year and 1/2 to get back? O.o

Vegeta needs to put the pedal-to-the-metal..NOW! Ewwww, just thinking about Fronshir 'taking' Vegeta makes me ill.. and, Kami only knows what that damned Dunduil is up to, still..
Goku should just finish him off, before he figured out how to fuck with Vegeta, as well...
Daaayum, I just love this...it tingles me, lol
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Great chapter, as always. Interesting, so Fronsir didn't take his chance to get laid with Vegeta. I would thought that he's going to use the oportunity like this one. Vegeta is returning, yeah ! Thank you, I will stay tuned so take your time and write, write, WHRITE.

Chapter 21 - Yay! Goku finally reached Vegeta and Vegeta broke free!!! :D I'm glad Piccolo was there to pick up Goku afterwards, and I'm glad Vegeta decided to return, rather than go further away.

Von and Gohan certainly are good together!