rate_review Reviews

No! Just, no, no, no! Vegeta needs to realize what is happening, and snap Fronshirs goddamned neck! Sonovabitch! Oooh, that just makes me feel all nasty..and, why in hell, does Vegeta have to be a goddamned damsel-in-distress, anyway? Lol, I hope like hell that this doesn't get any messier before it starts getting better, or I'll have a nervous breakdown!
Lol
XD

I love this story, I just found it and I can't stop reading it. I can't wait to find out what going to happend with Gohan.

ugh, you're such a tease >.> it's agonizing enough that Vegeta's away and everyone's going crazy without him and he's going crazy without them...not to mention ur putting in teasers in the situations that everyone's been expecting...but that's why ur probably doing it huh? 'Cuz everyone's expecting them. :p well, i guess the only question is, will he go back? or is there going to be a sequel called 'Back?' *sighs* i'd be more than happy to volunteer to 'help' Gohan through Horunta. :) The only thing is, I don't think I'll be able to survive it lol. Carry on, dear. This story went from interesting to a must read. Now, excuse me while I add it to my recommended stories.

So much UST between Gohan and Von! The interuptions must stop! :P j/k That was an interesting conversation between Goku and the new comer. I really think that guy wanted to pick fight just to see what Goku was capable of. Makes me wonder what a normal saiyan's power level is, because it doesn't seem that much stronger than Krillan.

I can't believe Vegeta is letting his gaurd down that much around Fronshir.

I was without internet for a bit. Sorry. Chapter 14 -

Not too sure how I feel about Fronshir interest in Vegeta. I'm wondering what uses Vegeta will put his telepathy to. :D

I know I don't like Dunduil. I do want to know more of the past between him and Von. I'd like to see more of Piccolo's thoughts on the interaction he sees between Gohan and Von. I caught that bit about Gohan leaning too close to Goku. Interesting. I'll get to chapter 15 in the next couple of days!

The tension between Gohan and Von is so frustrating and wonderful at the same time. I love it!

After this chapter, Fronshir isn't seeming like such a bad guy. It's going to take them 8 months to get to his home planet?

I'm sort of glad Goku stopped Bulma from going out to spy on the saiyans. I do wonder why he's so worried about it though.

Reading this is like reading about a really good movie. :) Except they're no pictures. 8(

Please, please say that Vegeta is coming back..SOON..I can't hardly
stand it, you little brat, you..lol, jk(?)
XD

That was a lot of information to pack into a chapter! I totally understand how Goku feels. Not certain what it all pertains to, but there is certainly a lot to think about!

I'm starting to like Von, if only for Gohan's sake. Stupid phone!!!!