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Thank you for the very interesting, long and heated chapter! Love reading this story! Looking forward to when Vegeta comes back.

Who are these Saiyans? How do they know what they know, and NOT know
Goku's Saiyan name? And, who the fuck is the alien prince who just so happened
to be stranded in space? I hope that he doesn't try to fuck Vegeta, even though
he is lost and lonely without Goku. Who, btw, has proven, yet again, that he IS
the biggest idiot on the planet...does he love Vegeta, or not? Will he come back
to earth? Goddammit, I need to know..hurry and update again, soon, please!!
Thanks!
XD

This made me smile - Goku looked like he was so lost in thought he might not ever find his way out again. Wonderful analogy. :P
I don’t trust this Fronshir person at all. And Vegeta just left him in the control room of the ship? That is totally un-Vegeta like. He’s been in space too long!
Ah-hA! Piccolo is jealous, hn? I hope Goku is in better mental shape the next time they meet up, too, Piccolo!

This is a great great story! The characters are so well developed and their interactions are perfect. Thanks for the update and the longer the chapters, the better!

Sorry it took so long to finish chapter 10!

Well, the introduction of more sayians will at least give Gohan options other than Goku...dang it. *sighs*

I'm glad they are other sayians, but I really don't like the way they are behaving. How many will Goku have to smack around before they get the fact he doesn't want to be king. Being the strongest is a plus, but Goku is nowhere near ready for the other responsibilities - nor does he want them! He didn't want to take Kami's place, for goodness sake, why would he want to be king?

Oh-oh - even more going on than Von knows about, huh?

I missed the update of chatper 9! Everyone has their own struggles. Gohan's behavior is the best explained, even though you didn't go into first person POV for him. I liked that you used Trunks and Goten to explain Gohan in this time period.

Ah-ha! More Saiyans. Wonder how that's going to be when they turn up on Earth and there is no Vegeta....I Guess I'll read chapter 10 today and find out!

~all they did was talk some and do light sparring and have incredible sex.~ Sounds like saiyan heaven to me!

~How was he supposed to explain to Vegeta that he didn’t want him anymore? That wasn’t true, not entirely. He would love to still have the benefits of being with Vegeta, without actually being with him. That was so wrong. How could he ever tell him that? He couldn’t, he would have to simply give the man up entirely.~ ACK! No way to compromise? He’s so certain of his own foundations that he doesn’t think Vegeta’s might be different?

I’m sort of disappointed that the transformations stopped. Is there any way they can control it and make it happen, if they wanted?

~all of that,” I look down at the last moment,~ ~ awesome body language moment!


I'm interested to see the new development, develop! I wonder how it will bring things together, or push them further apart.

Unfortunately, I'm having to complete this chapter is sections. I guess it is also a good thing, because it makes me slow down and enjoy the moment. I'm leaving a review now, because I don't want to forget to do so.

Maybe not as much as Goku and Vegeta are (at least up to the point I am in the chapter.) It was very smart of Goku to take them off planet. I can only imaging how frustrating it would be to have Gohan and Piccolo decide to show up every time things were starting to get intersting.

Yummy lemon! mmmmmmmmmm

To the lemon - how can I say anything but yummy? So, YUMMY! Vegeta's thought while Goku was sleeping were interesting insight. Goku's thoughts were a little more to the point, but I don't think he has so much he's trying to hide from himself like Vegeta is.

I wonder if Piccolo will ever get the chance to tell Gohan how he feels.

Thank you for the update!

I thought for a moment that Goku was going to take Vegeta but was secretly glad that Vegeta was top :) Hope Goku doesn't regret it when he comes to!

Gohan has it bad for the prince, I see trouble ahead :(