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August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A come on.... you cant be serious to finish it like this!!!! >_<
Why not make it more it has nice start and it has possibility to have nice long story at least think about it Why make it just one-shot story!! T_T
at least consider option to make more XD
Why not make it more it has nice start and it has possibility to have nice long story at least think about it Why make it just one-shot story!! T_T
at least consider option to make more XD
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August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well i can say that it would be interestig to see how will things turn out if(when) situation become to turn around... I just hope that you will continue to make more chapters. ^^
Hope to see story get more progress to.
Well good luck with your writing until next chapter ^_-
Hope to see story get more progress to.
Well good luck with your writing until next chapter ^_-
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August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
noticed that no one was reviewing you at all, which was a surprise because you've authored some of the few interesting and well written one shots on this site. very descriptive, with lots of fine details that make the plot that much more intricate. the emotions were also quite realistic and believable. its easy to imagine 18 behaving like this. you've got her perfectly in character. well done :)