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awesome

Awww I love all the awkward but sweet moments between those two! Trunks is hilarious for wanting to spank Goten and then having such a difficult time executing it haha Goten is so sneaky being the one in control the whole time mehehe. Nice one shot, would enjoy another one! This was very fun to read :)

Perfect writing! So interesting story and hot hot hot!

ahh hot stuff :D:D

This was immensely entertaining. Trunks trying very hard to be dominant was hilarious and the fact that Goten was laughing at him--aware, presumably, of who was really in charge--was just perfect. I really loved Goten's submissive dominance thing, and I think you got their relationship right on. I've always that that even though Trunks seemed in charge on the outside, it was totally Goten who had all the power there. :)

And of course, it was sexy as all hell. Despite the comic awkwardness, the whole thing was very hot. I was disappointed when it was over.

In short, I enjoyed the hell out of this. Good job.