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January 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG That was the AWESOME story I've read in the longest!!!!! I LOVED it!! I PRAY you'll write more!! Or other stories!!! Please, please, please write more!!
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October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe I can totally see that happening that way. I really liked how you switched between chi-chi and goku you even changed your writting style a little to show the different character voices. You droped it a little on the last Goku part but still very well done.