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October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this one, the flow of the dialog was very well written but who was speaking was at times a little hard to follow. And the whole people in his head thing severly confused me. But other than that I did like it. Just don't do that whole crazy people talking in your head thing again and you will be doing great. Keep them comming!