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the prodigal writer returns!! :D that was quite tasteful. honestly, the hottest Goten/Vegeta story I've read yet. of course, that's to be expected :) by the way, are you taken? 'cuz, I'm in love with your writing-i mean...you ;) definitely not the writing....okay it's the writing i love....there, i said it! ><

*drools at screen before shaking head* They should make movies out of your stories...or at least a doujinshi. >.> ...I don't know if I spelled that right hehe. Ah, the surprise ending of who the main character's partner was...and here I was thinking it was Gohan. ;) But, with Goten it's different. I especially liked it how Vegeta was uke and Goten was the dom. X) I think you should make a fic of em. :3 However, it makes me curious on when this was made. :/ But then again, it's a oneshot, no? So it don't matter hehe. Ohhhh but I can wait for this one to come out. :o Finish your other ones first. I'm about to go into a panic attack at the sheer suspense that you have me in on a few of your stories. >< ...and my comp pushed me a little closer since it decided to overheat while I was in the middle of watching True Blood. >.> Squee with me or poke fun all you want...it's an awesome show...despite all the drama, but that's a conversation for another time. Right now, tasty story and so are the others that you've updated recently. ;) I hope you continue. ^^

I died at this, seriously. Quite possibly the best way to lose it. For ANYONE. Lol. But in all seriousness, your right, you don't see many a pairing with these two. More likely a good one. And lets just say, you pass with flying colors. No retest for you. Unless you decide to write some more of this. I see no problem with that. :)

I love this! I hope you continue on with the pairing. I have to say that I love Vegeta with ANY of the Sons and you don't see enough of these two.