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by Vegetaswriter

person Kit-kit
schedule June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg..wats goin to happen nxt
schedule June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh. OH. Brolly DID that, huh? This is going to be so interesting and heartbreaking!
person animeslave18
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhh!!! Terrible, terrible!! You're so terrible!! >< Short! Too damn short! I need details! It's agony watching the events unfold one little bitty piece at a time and expecting us to wait several weeks or more until you update again!! *bangs head against laptop after saying every word* Terrible!!! You're so terrible!! *takes a deep breath....then lets it out* Although, I can understand how you can get burned out, I mean...I didn't think you were actually going to pull off that Daily Prizes deal. Alas....I must *grits teeth* continue to wait. >< And the world of savages story...its due date for an update is looooong overdue. ....you're driving me crazy, ok? >.> Can you blame me? See, this is what happens when you start so many stories and before you know it, you can't finish 'em. :p At least that's how it would be with me. The inspiration dies somewhere along that line. >.> By the way, the story is great, you're just a horrible person for keeping everyone (me) on edge on this story. The story isn't terrible. :) Hope I didn't scare ya hehe.
person Topbear
schedule June 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh nooooooo. Poor vegeta. At least you show how much you love kakarotto.
person Zofo
schedule May 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear seems Goku got a bit too cocky regarding Brolly and is now going to pay for it. I'm trembling at what you have in storee but can't stop reading :)
schedule May 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An incredible update with jealous!Broly!!! Oh the drama... bring me more drama! The family, the sex... did I mentioned the cliffhanger in the end?!

Great suspense.
person Kit-kit
schedule April 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg its getting to the juice part. Whats going to happen to kakarott.
person Geta6310
schedule April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Kaka gets mind-blowing sex and gets kidnapped for it! Tsk-tsk. I can't wait to see what Broly has in store & how Vegeta is going to handle it. Will he kill his bestfriend to save his true love?...well when he finds out Kaka is missing lol Will Broly have demands of his own? As willy wonka once said while Augustus gloop is stuck a pipe... "The suspense is killing me, I hope it lasts forever" LMFAO! I'll be waiting for the next chapter, its soo worth it :D
person animeslave18
schedule April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*gasp!* Oh noooos! :o Broly has interfered! >< I always had a feeling he would. I mean, with your stories, they can't end without something terrible happening. :p Let's just hope it's a happy ending this time. Or, in however ending you wish it to be. ^^ Goodness, I was beginning to worry dear. :/ I thought maybe you gave up on your stories or maybe the inspiration/plot bunny has ran away from you. :o But now I can see that is not the case and I'm glad you're updating again. :) You're creativity never leaves me disappointing and thus I shall stick with it until the end. ^^
person KaptajnBellaMus
schedule April 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh ! I love this.
You are and amazing writer. I hope you keep writing :D
You got yourself a new number 1 fan - Me!
Just read everything you been writing in here. And you really are amazing.
Keep up the brilliant work !

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