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Oooo smoking! I actually prefer Vegeta as seme (or at least both of them taking turns) so I was delighted with this chapter. Well worth the wait :)

Ooooo yesh, that was naughty...and sweet altogether. :) But gasp! What about Bulma and Chichi? Will they find out? Oooo and Broly? Okay, so...what is the deal with Broly and Vegeta? Does Vegeta know Broly has a thing for him? And I'm pretty sure he said something to Bulma about Kakarot. Ah who cares about that right now, they finally got together. ^^ *rereads chapter until it's permanently etched into her brain* :3

loved it...im glad you updated

Ah! But many thanks for the hint this time, it made wonders for ~my~ poor memory! hehe, but, heeeeey, lemon! And the cute eternal damnation. Did I tell you already that your Vegeta's aura is lovely?

kisses!

Finally they have admittted it to each other and it seems are going to act on it. I see trouble ahead though if the wives suspect :(

Hello, you!!! I'm so glad I'm reviewing this fic, it is so exciting and it seems I arrived right in the time ^.~

I'm adoring the plot and the circumstances and difficulties upon those two, I'm loving how your rejected Vegeta remain strong and how every character has a light in this. They're greatly described and are so fierce that's refreshing; (want more, want mooooore), buuuuuts! You have some little issues to work on for next update (wich I hope it will be soon): 1- commas and vocatives, you're forgetting that sometimes, is "Kakarot, I'm waiting for you tonight" and not "Kakarot I'm waiting for you tonight" and 2- misspelling, "your" and "you're" are different things.

Anyway! I'm loving this fic. Please, could you email me when you do update? jubbles bubbles @ hotmail . com ?

thanks!

I enjoyed very much :) But the suspense is agony! What cliff hangers you leave lol. I'm half expecting Brolly to burst in at a very awkward moment :S

This is another teaser so what's going to happen next! Too short! I am so happy they will be together finally.

oohh they finally said it...and now the real fun begins. kakarott meeting vegeta in his private rooms all alone. i just can't wait

Okay...

So I'm LOVING the new chapter! Bah I should review more often, however I am quite flakey and often forget to review after reading >.<

I like how you express the feelings of Kakarot and of Vegeta. This has to be my favorite couple next to Vegeta/Gohan. And you do it so well.

Can't wait for the next chapter!