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by Vegetaswriter

person Chibi
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffhanger!!! Please update again soon :)
person kitkit
schedule December 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nnnoooo not a cliff-hanger. hurry with the update..this might be the moment they express there love
person Topbear
schedule December 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor kaka, in such a conflict. I want to see Vegeta train of thoughts too. Now they meet, would there be big bang?
person Zofo
schedule December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So they will be around each other more often now and living in the same place, things are looking up :)
person topbear
schedule December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a teaser!
person kitkit
schedule December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oohh this is getting interesting, kakarott is going to start being around vegeta more...helping "council" him. *snicker*..hopefully this new temple will be the push they need to get together.
schedule November 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
just oozes pure awesomeness :D, i really love this fic
person kitkit
schedule November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love it...is trunks going to be born in this story, since gohan was?? And what does bulma know about kakarott and vegeta relationship...did broly tell her??
person Topbear
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Don't know why I reviewed three times now still not on. I want say I am really happy you updated I check almost very day. It seems goku is going to crumble soon. You have done great job, I absolutely love the story
person Zofo
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was depressed reading this as it seems they are getting further apart but the last sentence has given me hope :)

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