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I love it, and i think its really cool and diffrent that you made bulma the bicth usually its chichi great story keep up the great work!

Omg. I am addicted to this fic. Now that I think about it...this is probably my first Goku(Kakarot)xVegeta fic ever and I'm so very glad I gave it a shot. I've always loved reading about Ancient Egypt and watching documentaries on it so I was quite curious how you would mesh some of that with the DBZ characters. In my opinion, you're doing great. I really enjoy reading from the perspective of your Kakarot. His non-relationship with Vegeta is intense to say the least! I had a 'shit just got real moment' when Vegeta confessed to Kakarot. Usually I'm all for pacing the romance but I couldn't help thinking,"about damn time!" Now if Kakarot would just realize he doesn't want Vegeta JUST for his sexy god-like body but rather wants the 'whole enchilada' we'll be good to go. *whispers* I say that but I really want it drawn out as tortuously as possible...because anything less wouldn't do their relationship justice. They have been dancing around each other for YEARS, after all. What's a few more? *grumbles* Is it obvious that I'm feeling conflicted? Lol.

Annnnnnd I'm dying of curiosity as to how Brolly comes back into the picture, because his character in this fic is just BOUND to invite drama. Not to mention Vegeta's wifey is bound to be a giant cock-block waiting to happen. Oh wait...it already has.

I look forward to an update. D:

How does Bulma know, intriquing! Is she a sorcerous or up to no good?

Aww, now Kakarot has wounded Vegeta's heart, hope he comes to his senses soon :)

Two update in the same day! You made my day! Love how you set vegeta to confess first. His confession to kakarotto always melt my heart. But kaka was not sure. I wonder how this is going. Bulma sounds intelligent and evil.

hehe sorry about my unfaithfulness, i was busy with uni, but this is truly beautiful , it's well written & done & i'm excited for more

Grrr, I have to wait again! I'm having difficulty in straying my hands from the rocks. Still, the bath scene was very hot so I'll let you off for now :)

*pants in suspense while holding the rock in the air, but slowly puts it down* You're terrible! Xp That lemon better be long! ...and naughty. >.> *smiles, but quickly puts on a serious face* Oooo a deep space horror fic, huh? O.o Sounds kinda like Dead Space or something. I've never played or seen, but it looks creepy. I know right? O.o Inspiration is hard to come by. I'm actually writing two stories that have the same theme and I can't decide which one to stick with and post! >< *sighs* I'll probably never get around to posting them anyway, since my computer decided to stop receiving internet and now have to borrow one every now and then. v.v ...need to get a new one. >.> Anyway, looking forward to anything you write. :) As long as you don't keep me in suspense too long. :p

Wow, what a teaser. The tension is getting thicken , if possible. Brolly is stand in the way. Wonder how you are going to deal with him. Love the story.

darn broly always interupting...if not for him kaka and vege would of continue. oh why oh why did they have to b interupted...sooo cruel.

Oooo you tease! I have to wait for another chapter for the bath scene. You can cut the tension in there with a knife!