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March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I stopped reading when Heero thought of Duo as his sexy bishie(!), I mean what the hell?! Heero would never say bishie. That's a big OOC!
On top of that already on the first chapter there's some spelling mistakes or mismatched words like: "tell" instead of "till". Sorry but its just too amateurish for me. Thanks for your efforts but I sincerely advise you to get a beta, for editing purposes at least.
Those spaces in between paragraphs aren’t doing this fic any favors.
On top of that already on the first chapter there's some spelling mistakes or mismatched words like: "tell" instead of "till". Sorry but its just too amateurish for me. Thanks for your efforts but I sincerely advise you to get a beta, for editing purposes at least.
Those spaces in between paragraphs aren’t doing this fic any favors.
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December 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loving it! can't wait to read the rest! :)