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December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that's made me feel better, together at last (with Brolli as well!) :)
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December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw and it had a happy ending after all. ^^ I'm glad. :)
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November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi B here,
that was sad and deep. I feel sorry for Goku, and yet everyone else was happy; it all stemmed for his choices. Always thought Vegeta and Broli were an attractive couple. Don't know if you have plans to continues this story or if you even can given Vegeta and Broli are dead. The only thing left would be to have Goku look for his descendants and Vegeta's in space. A good piece to think on.
Thanks for the read.
Ja ne
b-chan
that was sad and deep. I feel sorry for Goku, and yet everyone else was happy; it all stemmed for his choices. Always thought Vegeta and Broli were an attractive couple. Don't know if you have plans to continues this story or if you even can given Vegeta and Broli are dead. The only thing left would be to have Goku look for his descendants and Vegeta's in space. A good piece to think on.
Thanks for the read.
Ja ne
b-chan
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November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know, I'm not a fan of song fics: they're annoying, they break the flow, and they're just read weird for me. But I have to say, you did an outstanding job with this, and you actually made a song-fic that I wouldn't' mind reading again :) Good choice of lyrics, the tone of the song also fits really well with the progression of Goku's inner monologue. Thank you for posting!
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November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So sad, yes it should of been him :(