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by chroniclyflaming

person Valeris
schedule October 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ok, I don't have an account on here right now. (maybe I need to get one). But, I hope you don't mind an annoymous review because I'm praising this story. It was quite funny, and honestly I could see that happening. I know there's a reasonable amount of Future Trunks/Present Trunks yaoi and three-way material out there, but this is the first time I've seen this type of pairing with Bulma. And to be perfectly honest, with Bulma's ego I can see Bulma/Bulma happening more than Trunks/Trunks.

Speaking of Trunks, I just kept laughing so much at him having some bizarre apparently sexual relationship with Krillin, Yamcha, #17, and #18. You should totally write a fic where the androids use Yamcha for oral sex. Also, it was kind of sweet of Vegeta to not want to hurt the Bulma's feelings by teeling them about the shit F. Trunks gets up too.

Overall, good story and I had a nice laugh. I like how you write a lot of crack and for crack fic it's reasonably in character and also humerous. Then again, the entire DB franchise is kind of cracky after all.

 

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