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Nice job! The DBZ fandom needs more 17/Yamcha and this was great. I love how devious and manipulative 17 was and how he plans on bragging to his sister about the whole experience. Also, the mention of Dr. Gero behaving like an overprotective parent and having 19 babysit the twins was both funny and creepy. Anyway, I like how is was totally not hard at all for 17 to talk Yamcha into sexing him up. I really liked how sweet Yamcha was to 17 during the sex too. I also like how Yamcha didn't get how booty calls work and wanted to basically walk/fly 17 home. He really is a nice guy.

As for that "needing some coolant" scenario...you should definately write that. It sounds really hot.