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At least Goku still has ki but they lost it due to a virus, so won't Goku catch it too, hope he's immune.

I kinda thought they might all be in HFIL and fighting against being cleansed, but it's a new universal enemy that's after them. Exciting :) wonder who it is?
I wonder also what has happened to the Kai's in this universe or if they even exist.

There was a bit of a spark between Vegeta and Goku there so I hope it blossoms, thought Vegeta's medical condition has me worried even before Goku injured him.

Really loving this story.

This was actually very good i like it I like it!

AAAAW this can't be it I want to read more!

Gosh everything seems shot to hell! I wonder who the enemy is and Brain?

Looking forward to Goku meeting Raditz, but worried about Vegeta's pills.

Can't wait for more :)

Well I was proper confused in the first two chapters but now I know Goku is from another dimension I am excited to see what you have planned for us :)

Very nice surprise! I am really looking forward to reading how you decide to handle Vegeta dealing with Goku, who already feels close to him and has some unsettling insight into his personality from experience that Vegeta doesn't know. Good job setting up the original characters and this new dimension early on, and I liked how interesting the other rebels are and the glimpses into the different relationships. Vegeta seems more vulnerable, no matter how he tries to cover it up, than the one from canon, and I can't wait to see Goku getting to know him. And how will Goku react to Radditz? I'm sure Goku could make a big difference in the rebellion, but I hope it isn't too simple and that he is overwhelmingly powerful--> end of war. I wonder how Vegeta can match up against him? I am a huge fan of Vegeta/Goku and hope we'll be seeing a lot of those two feeling attracted or fighting an attraction toward each other. Great story and I hope you update soon!

Unusual. I'm still trying to get my head round what was happening, timelines, why Brolli was there. Hopefully you will clear it up soon :)