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for The diabolical switch!

by Vegetaswriter

person animeslave18
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! It got updated! ^^ I've been thinking about this story ever since you last updated it and that bit where Chichi was hitting on the prince was such a teaser! >< Truthfully, I was expecting Goku to get mad and go after Vegeta and beat him up...but I shoulda known he wouldn't do that hehe. I understand. :/ I wouldn't know what to call them either...but what will the kid call him? O.o I don't blame ya for thinking about that about the women. I remember what Chichi was like during Dragonball and it's almost hard to believe that she went from a gushing young girl that was learning how to become the perfect wife to a screeching paranoid one hehe. Always want more. ^^
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more chapters! I love the story!
person Topbear
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A merkas, interesting idea. Does that mean vegeta can carry baby for goku? Oh wait, now goku is vegeta, so that he can carry baby for vegeta. Hoho. Funny. Please update soon.
person animeslave18
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...is Chichi doing what I think she's doing? O.o 'Cause that's just awesome! Oh, but poor Goku. :o He has to find out like this...hehe. It's different though. I mean, you hardly read anything where Chichi has a thing for Vegeta. A merkas hm? Where's that word from? Google picked it up as a german word, but doesn't seem to know what it means hehe. I am eager to see how their relationship will progress and what other diabolical shenanigans the gods will come up for them. :)
person cahepyp
schedule April 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I found this to be very humorous. XD I almost laughed myself out of my chair! Good job, I can't wait for more :D
person Yaya
schedule April 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy this fic updated! I hadn't thought of Ginyu's body-switch before in relation to this, but I'm glad Goku made the connection. Meditation sounds like a good idea, and I'm interested in seeing how you'll handle that like if Vegeta and Goku will have to meditate together, or talk with each other about how each thinks about their energy, or what obstacles might get in the way of figuring out how to use the new body's chi. Ginyu started getting used to Goku's body as he was fighting and having to deal with it, though, so I wonder if you'll also add our favorite Saiyans sparring to get more familiar with how their bodies and chis work. Vegeta seemed to look down on Goku for a lot of this chapter, and even Goku got angry more quickly than I'd expected, but that makes sense with such a crazy, upsetting situation. I wonder, though, how much of Vegeta's insults was covering, considering how defensively he decided not to admit that he sort of had made a wish the night before to be more like Goku...

I was surprised Goku came up with a decent excuse for ChiChi about why 'Vegeta' would be staying at her house and 'Goku' wouldn't be around for the next few days, and even to keep her from talking with Bulma about it. Great job! Though that flirty bit at the end shocked me, and I wonder if Goku's going to hear more than he wanted to about what his wife thinks of him if she insults him to who she thinks is Vegeta. I loved how you described Goku's glee at being able to yell at ChiChi and gruffly tell her to shut up, as if he's always wanted to do that and now he can! A bit of his wish is coming true, it seems, when he can act like Vegeta without repercussion of his friends expecting him to be always happy and always forgiving and meek. Good for him! And Vegeta intends to tell Bulma the truth, but I wonder if he'll have to deal with any of the other fighters stopping by and treating him like Goku. Don't know, but can't wait to see more! And then they'll be trapped in a space ship together--yikes!

Good set-up and more of Goku realizing how intimidating his body can be, though I'd like to see Vegeta noticing and enjoying being able to intimidate Kakarrot better too. Looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule April 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think I've reviewed this story b4..only I used my real name..Kayla..so yea..just wanted to say ur welcome..if it was me u was talking to..lol..Anywayyy I really love this story..the new chapter cracked me up especially when Vegeta was trippin on Goku bc how he looked..woww..lmao..this is such an unique idea..and soo awesome! Yay for the new chapter and I can't wait for more..keep up the amazing work :)
person Geta6310
schedule April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
When I checked to see what stories were updated today, I squealed with excitment!!! My mom looked at me like I was insane, lol!!! I just love your stories.
This chapter is great, I could imagine just how messy Goku looked in our prince's bod & how scary Vegeta looks in Goku's. I wonder what Vegeta is going to say to the blue haired wench... will he pretend to be the happy-go-lucky fool? Or our usually cranky prince? Don't worry I am going to wait it out, I'M HOOKED!
As for Goku, I'm glad he's not holding back on his screeching harpy. And this is when things start to get REALLY intresting for poor Goku, His wife is a cheating SLUT!!! Keep Going!!!
person Anon
schedule April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another amusing chapter :)

Goku seems to want to stay like it for a while, hope we get to find out why. Vegeta is his angry self, though you would have thought he'd relish the chance to have all Goku's power, if he can master it.

I loved Goku pretending to be Vegeta to Chichi at the end but was she coming on to the prince? OMG!
person Zofo
schedule March 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellant second chapter, I found it very humerous and was smiling throughout :) I agree on Vegeta having the aches and pains from his previous life, seems fitting.

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