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February 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is very awesome. I like the mentions of 17 and 18 doing messed up things with Krillin and sometimes Trunks and Yamcha. I liked the overall premise too and how Vegeta is scarred for life. Oh well, I'm sure eventually Bulma will tell him to get over it. I think that Pan/Marron/Bra is now a new OTP for me. The part with the Future Trunks/Goku roleplaying was just great, especially because for a minute Vegeta really thought that Goten was Goku. And I liked Pan bringing up that Marron's parents would love to desecrate the hell out of Future Trunks--I mean his memory.