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February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow you have got to write more chapters for this one. That dialogue, the best!
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February 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it.
The only tip I would give is that the word for God in Japanese is 'kami' and not 'kame', this is awesome! Gonna go read your other fics now!
The only tip I would give is that the word for God in Japanese is 'kami' and not 'kame', this is awesome! Gonna go read your other fics now!
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February 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(blood spurts from nose) that was divine! I think I'll read your work from now on lol! I loooooved this so much! (yay Soncest) and I look forward to whatever you dish out next!
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February 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I squealed, I really did. That shit was awesome! I really needed that. You're pretty good, you know. Keep up the delicious work!
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February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
O...m...g. That was just...delightfully sinful and tasty. :) I've never seen anyone write Goku in such a way that would make him so dominating and...bold hehe. And Gohan was just loving it soooo much. ^^ Someone else seems to be a Gohan lover as well. ;) You do such a good job of writing your lemons, its like, i can actually understand how he's feeling hehe. It was so naughty and yet hot at the same time. I've never read an incest story that I liked so well. ^^ I hope you have more to come with stories like this and I'll be there to review. :3