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Gawd hun, that was hawt and tasty. :3 ...and long and naughty and many many other things that describe this chapter that the words just aren't enough to describe it! It was also very detailed, some I understood and others I wouldn't understand 'cuz they've never happened to me before hehe. So, will Vegeta still kill them or will he keep them for entertainment? :3 Will they also pay him or is the first one free? :p You should do one of that guy Tornack...the bounty hunter right? I was actually curious to know how that one goes. However, I wonder if his pleasure will compare to what Vegeta just went through? :3 Hehe and it's always good to see from you. ^^ I'm glad I'm not getting on your nerves yet. :p Although, I've been trying not to review as often as I would like hehe. Now, I must read that chapter twenty more times until I am sick of it or am satisfied in how many times I've read it. :)

I love it the lemon scene was so hot. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON. 

Ooooo good stuff, good stuff, good stuuuuuuff. Keep it going.

strangely i dont like AU's but i needed a vegeta fix and i liked it :I
moar plz

I Absolutely LOVE your writing! You're so deliciously wicked ;) You are the main reason I check AFF for new stories everyday. I'm always looking out for new chapters from you ^_^ Keep up the amazing work <3