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April 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the big bang its going to be good as I can see keep up the awesome work
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February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay! You updated! ^^ I was beginning to worry you lost your inspiration. O.o I'm not even peeved that it was a short chapter, I'm just glad you updated. :) Poor Goku. O.o It's really too bad he's so handsome, if not, then that harpy wouldn't be chasing him. She's so violent! Lol. If anything, she should be locked up in that asylum hehe. I like how you have Piccolo in here and he's totally in character. Love it. ^^ This is good writing. I hope you finish. :o
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March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love Beauty and the Beast and I love this version of it!! Keep up the good work :D !!
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March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really good idea to use an fairytale, love Vegeta as the Beast, suits him very well. I do wonder though, will there be a lemon later on? I will read either way, just curious.
I liked how Kakarot made his wish, just to meet Vegeta shortly after. Good idea.
I know the movie and know whats going to happen next, but I still can't wait to read it with Kakarot and Vegeta, I'm looking forward to what you're going to do with them.
I really like what you're writing here, keep up the good work.
I liked how Kakarot made his wish, just to meet Vegeta shortly after. Good idea.
I know the movie and know whats going to happen next, but I still can't wait to read it with Kakarot and Vegeta, I'm looking forward to what you're going to do with them.
I really like what you're writing here, keep up the good work.
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February 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*laughs hysterically while imagining the part where Goku is in the meadow* -Enter Goku- *sings* "I want adventure in the great wide somewhere! I want more than I can tell! And for once it would be grand, to have someone...understand. I want more than they have planned." -fade to black- *regains breathing* Ho, that should've been in there. :) ...along with the scene where Chichi and everyone else sings how great she is. XD Come on, they had to be singing there. It's hard to not imagine it, hehe. Anyway, good stuff. I guess the scene where Kakarot and Vegeta first met was expected, but in a way, it was still good. Probably because it had different characters. By the way, what's with Goten? Are he and Trunks 'together?' O.o He's not as suave as Lumiere (sp?) hehe. And I guess I'm still trying to figure out what the spell is. Is it they've all turned into saiyans? :/ I figured that would be better than being human, but I'm sure there's a good reason. Anyway, *giggles* looking forward to more. :)
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February 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I just now got what the three idiots stand for! They stand for the three girls drooling over the most 'handsome' man in town while those three drool over the most 'beautiful' girl in town, hahaha! It's funny, I could've made up some macho man wanting to take Goku's hand in marriage. ;) It's almost better to imagine it like that, but Chichi is more comical, hehe. Oooo I'm so eager to see what happens when Kakarot finds out that his father has been nabbed by a smexy beast! ;3 Eager, eager, eager.
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February 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Egad! One of my favorite disney movies! :D Hehe, when the story first started out, I thought everybody was going to start singing. I can imagine that. "Bonjour! ...there goes the baker with his tray like always..." And so on and so forth lol. I'd remember the rest, but its been a while since I've seen the movie. Wow, you weren't kidding when you said it was totally different, but that's good. No one wants a written version of the movie, its good to make up your own thing while on your way to the plot and while keeping some of the stuff from the movie the same. :) Although, there seem to be moments that are ruined with their rudeness or attempts at humor, but...they are saiyans. And I like how you have Vegeta portrayed as the 'beast.' He's in his fuzzy form. :3 More sexy and as beasty hehe. I can only imagine how Kakarot's going to react seeing him! *spaces off into dreamland, thinking of the encounter, then snaps out of it after a moment* Hehe, however, I've only read the first chappie. ^^' I shall read the second one now. :)