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Oh, my...I have never seen Goku portrayed as such an ass before this..shame
on him..I would love to see Vegeta give Gohan a chance..oooh, Goku will NOT
be happy! Do it! Do it!
XD

I went through quite a few emotions while reading this which shows just how talented you are. Gohan wasn't the only one who wanted to kick the crap out of Goku. Oh how I would just painfully murder him!!! Lol!!! You did an great job at hiding Gohans identity. When I read similar fanfics that try the same, I always figure it out early. I couldn't tell if the watcher was saiyan, namekian, or human. IT COULD OF BEEN KING KIA FOR HEAVEN SAKE! Lmfao ewww. Very sly of u VW, very sly indeed c: And Btw, I can't wait to see what you have in store for Diabolical Switch. So keep writing o'brillant one!!!