rate_review Reviews

It's been so long since I last read this. So, so long.

However, I can safely say this: It's still one of the best thing I've read, especially in the Beyblade fandom and for this pairing. Really.

Wow. I... I really like the Ray/Mariah tidbit, of course. And Max, whose problem we still have no idea about. About Tyson and Kai... damn, man. They don't only feel in character, they feel like they've grown. Which is to be expected, of course, but the 'growth' is so in character, somehow. Thank you for this. 

It's been years, and I understand if the story's abandoned. Of course, I would really like to see it continued, whether here or crossposted to another site, but... life is life. It's your choice, anyway. I just want to thank you for this story that you've made. Thank you.
-A

this is my favorite fanfiction ever! I know I'm late reviewing it but, I had to. I read pretty much ever beyblade yaoi fanfic out there (for real!) and this one is my all time favorite. I re read it every couple of months and gets sucked into it every single time! it's just so good, I love the format, the whole story, the way the characters behave and the fact that I can really feel all the emotions Kai experiences. If you ever read this, well, I'd like to say thank you for writing it! and if you ever feel like continuing it, I'd be the happiest person in the world :D

HELLO! IT'S ME AGAIN. YEAH.

So. It has been—almost two years? 2 years?—a long time since you last updated and I REALLY WISH you'd come and update more...

IC characters... And Kai smoking(suits him really)... And TyKa...
And YOU. I'm still waiting.
Will always wait. (...poetic much...?)

And for Red Light too... But it seems you discontinued it so okay. I'm definitely still waiting for this one though.

PLEEAAASSSEEE continue it! Come on... *puppy dog eyes*
GREAT story, idea, plot, spelling, pairing. Everything. I basically LIKE this story.
I'll review again possibly. It's just...a good story like this...dropped...*sob*
See ya soon; next chapter? I hope? :)
-A

*clears throat*

I agree with that review exactly above this one.

Finding a half-decent fiction is hard enough, let alone the ones that keeps on getting updated, so...

Well, I like this fic, it's definitely more than decent. I think, you score about 8,5 from 10. That's good. GREAT.

I like the way you write it, not too slow, just...fit. Nicely. And even, pretty... Realistic. Wow. Okay, I rarely say that. But yes, it IS realistic (my perception though). Not many can do that. And you don't go too deep too details yet it is easy to understand.

The characters fits too. For Tyson, Daichi, Hilary, etc... Nice. Really nice. Well, for Kai, I didn't know he can be THAT open. *chuckles* But nice, though. It's not too far from the ice-cold team captain we always know. And I think so too, that a part of him would always be their team captain. It's just natural for him. Realistic, I told you.

About pairing, well,.. TyKa is my fav pairing so, haha, that adds points to this fic.

I will keep on reviewing.

And I WILL WATCH OVER THIS FIC. LIKE ALMOST EVERYDAY.

~* Phoenix / Autumn *~

You have to keep writing this! It's not easy to find even a half decent fic. these days, let alone one that keeps getting written.

Keep going! I know life has a lot of stuff and fic writing easily becomes the last thing on the list, but really, if you can- update.

You updated! OUO Thank you! <3333 No one has ever dedicated a chapter to me ahhhhh thank you! I feel so bad that I haven't checked this story for so long. QAQ

I am loving everything so far hehe. Though I wish Takao could fight those bullies. I think that if you gave him something similar to a sword, he could defend himself but I don't think he knows how to fight just with his bare hands.

And KAI AHAHAHA I laughed so much at the end when I realised that he was drunk. XD I was a bit disappointed that the anime didn't talk about Kai's parents so I like how you're bringing the aspects of the manga in too. C: You portray Kai well.

Also the part about Rei not wanting to commit is good, I can see him doing that.

Can't wait to see where the plot is going :>>>
Thanks for the update again and hope to see you soon!

P.S. Would it be too much trouble to ask you to send me an email when you update?

Clarie

You updated! OUO Thank you! <3333 No one has ever dedicated a chapter to me ahhhhh thank you! I feel so bad that I haven't checked this story for so long. QAQ

Gosh darnit I don't think my last review went through properly

I am loving everything so far hehe. Though I wish Takao could fight those bullies. I think that if you gave him something similar to a sword, he could defend himself but I don't think he knows how to fight just with his bare hands.

And KAI AHAHAHA I laughed so much at the end when I realised that he was drunk. XD I was a bit disappointed that the anime didn't talk about Kai's parents so I like how you're bringing the aspects of the manga in too. C: You portray Kai well.

Also the part about Rei not wanting to commit is good, I can see him doing that.

Can't wait to see where the plot is going :>>>
Thanks for the update again and hope to see you soon!

P.S. Would it be too much trouble to ask you to send me an email when you update?

Clarie

And again ahhh

You updated! OUO Thank you! No one has ever dedicated a chapter to me ahhhhh thank you! I feel so bad that I haven't checked this story for so long. QAQ

Gosh darnit I don't think my last review went through properly

I am loving everything so far hehe. Though I wish Takao could fight those bullies. I think that if you gave him something similar to a sword, he could defend himself but I don't think he knows how to fight just with his bare hands.

And KAI AHAHAHA I laughed so much at the end when I realised that he was drunk. XD I was a bit disappointed that the anime didn't talk about Kai's parents so I like how you're bringing the aspects of the manga in too. C: You portray Kai well.

Also the part about Rei not wanting to commit is good, I can see him doing that.

Can't wait to see where the plot is going c:
Thanks for the update again and hope to see you soon!

P.S. Would it be too much trouble to ask you to send me an email when you update?

Clarie

This is so good :DDD I'm liking the plot a lot; it keeps you on the edge all the time.

So glad to see some active KaiTaka authors around. C:

When I checked the bookmark that I had on your story I was so ecstatic that I gave up on sleeping earlier, haha.