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Once again another amazing story! You really know how to write, i so jelly.

Gods it was awesome, the military thing is pretty hot. I can just imagine alle the Z-boy being Privates and Vegeta there Sergent.

Anyway - As always AMAZING! :D

*sighs* You have more of an influence over me than you think. I never, NEVER made a facebook account until now. I wanted to see the pic so badly, so I made one! >< Unfortunately, I know nothing of how the site works so...I'm still hunting for it. :/ Either that or you haven't posted it yet. Don't judge me. I just saw the site as a hassle. >.> Not to mention I don't have many friends...don't judge me. >< I mean, I barely keep up with my deviantart account...and I badly need to make some friends and favorite some stuff. Before I found yaoi, I had deviantart, which led me to yaoi. :) However, I don't know the site as well as I used to. Ugh, I feel like I'm getting out of touch with technology. :/ Oh well. By the way, I do have an idea for a Brolly and Vegeta fic, but it might have to be a chapter fic. >< It was originally gonna be Kakarot and Vegeta, it was gonna have Brolly in it as well. I think the theme is a bit odd, but as far as I know, no one's written one about it yet. O.o I could probably post it on the 27th and go from there, since I don't really have a whole lot of time to work on it. I was really, really trying to think how to squeeze it all together into a oneshot, but it's impossible. >< So, anyway...um, let me know how to get the pic or just e-mail it to me hehe. ^^' I tried hunting for it on deviantart, but...there's a lot to sift through. :/ Unless I knew the title of the pic or something. ...damn it, I wanna see it so bad! >.> By the way, you're writing a lot of sad chappies lately. O.o Is you feeling okay? :o

i loved chapter seven and in my mind the whole time i was seeing Raditx doing all of those push ups. dunno why, i guess it's just the way he wanted to prove his strength to Vegeta. :D gave me some new fanatsies that's for sure!

Omg i laughed so much at Shh..
It was brilliant, and i can totally see the picture of Bulma and Chi-Chi listing to Vegeta and Goku.
Once again - AMAZING ! <3

Chapter five made me giggle but chapter six was hot! it even made me blush just getting the image of them in an alley where ANYONE could have walked up on them. i give you two thumbs up for this one. *fans self*

....damn it, I have to review for every chapter! >< Ooooo *trembles in delight* you definitely should do another one of those again. I believe my favorite part out of all of that was..."Vegeta brought the bloody belt to his mouth and laved the liquid away, nearly shivering at the taste." Oooo goodness. I'm getting light headed just thinking of the image. *puts on a dreamy smile* Someone (not me >.>) should draw a picture of that image. That would be truly delightful. :3 *shivers again when thinking it* and I couldn't think of a better pairing than them two. ^^ Gohan is the next hottest piece of ass next to Vegeta. They just go together...like peanut butter and chocolate. x) As always, ecstatic for more. :)

this chapter was hawt! i have read quiet a few Goku/Vegeta bondage but this is the first time i have ever seen gohan/vegeta bondage and i love it :D!

Oooo a Goten and Vegeta pairing! ^^ Very rare indeed. I was just thinking the other day about how there isn't enough of them two. I believe I only read one other story with the pairing and...that's it hehe. Well, this one wasn't as romantic. :o However I do know what you mean. Vegeta and Bulma are, so far, my favorite het pairings. I have read a couple of them, but not many...and 'every' guy should feel like that when they cheat on someone that loves them dearly. >.> Just saying. :) ...those cheating bastards. Anywho, in this case, I'm not going for one or the other. Just wanting more of your delicious writing. ^^ Hehe unfortunately my dear, that person is not me. I have enough trouble trying to finish one story. >< However, it might be possible for me to make a oneshot. O.o But that shall take some serious thinking on my part. Would you like a plot or a porn without one? :)

*drools at the mention of lemon pie* O.o That's it. I'm making one this weekend. ><

Aws, this was lovely too. ^^ There's nothing wrong with being romantic. :) Hell, I don't even know how to be romantic hehe. What a coincidence! :D Hehe, it seems that a lot of my friends are like that too...don't want me to buy them anything, but damn it I feel like spoiling them every once in a while hehe. Not to mention they do it to me, so it kinda irks me when they won't let me do it back. :/ Nah, you must be referring to someone else. >< I started reading my first story again (the one that you wish me to finish) so I can get back in the mood to write it and just so I can remind myself what I did write...but, I couldn't even finish reading the first chapter! >< It's so much different in how I'm writing now. Everything is in third person now instead of first, like how I started out writing it. Not to mention...it just...sounds like someone else wrote it. :/ You know what I mean? I am ashamed to admit that the inspiration for that story is gone. :( Not to mention I didn't have anything planned out for it. I was just winging it in every chapter. *sighs* I can't believe I made it a male pregnancy one too. >_> I don't know anything about that...let along a female one. >< Sure I could look it up but...that's probably what made me lose my inspiration...because I thought it was something I couldn't write. I think the reason why I made it so was because I was into that at the time (I still am, but not as much) and somehow thought I could pull it off. :/ I do have it set to where someone can post a chapter, but I don't know how that works hehe. I might have to log in in order for that to work, but the damn site won't let me for some reason. >.> ...and I went through that whole 'update' thing, so I don't know what the deal is. I can only review for now. Anyway, I shall attempt to finish Deceitful Allies and Trustworthy Foes, since I pretty much have it planned out in how I want to end it and it's only a few more chappies. Other than that, I'm sorry to let down all my readers/fans. >< Especially you. :( I feel selfish in praying that you'll finish your stories and here I haven't even finished one. ><

Anyway, I'll quit wallowing in self-pity and move on to the review you deserve. :) At first I got a bit confused because of the first chapter, but then I remembered why you're writing this and got back on track. ^^ Hehe V.W. loves her Super Saiyan Brolly. :3 And there's nothing wrong with that. ^^ He is quite smexy. :) Hehe...once again I got a bit confused when you mentioned nobleman because I was thinking of Kakarot and then it clicked that it was Brolly hehe. Good stuff, good stuff. ^^ I hope lemony pie (is there actually lemon pies? O.o I would like to try one hehe) comes in about the first two chappies. :3 Either that or something new...you know I love anything you write. :)

I love these :D i was hooked on the first chapter. Sorry i couldn't review before but now that i have the internet i can :D. the third chapter made me cry a bit but i love how it ended. can't wait for the next one :D