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July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it so much....best story ever!!!
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June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far! I am also a fan of Broly and Goku pairings, there just isn't enough of the two
Xoxo
Xoxo
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May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think this is my favorite rare pairing. I like where you're going with this. Please continue.
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May 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, I wrote a review but it deleted it somehow. >:/ *begins to try and retype what I typed earlier and fails horribly*
Anywho, good chapter. I'm glad to see you haven't forsaken this piece, yet. I was beginning to worry.
Oh, so Brolly is still intending to go against his word? That's going to be interesting to see. Keeping Goku's wife and friends alive is probably the only thing stopping Goku from doing something stupid (like suicide or attacking Brolly). It seems he's still intent at unleashing his evil insidious mad plans. But perhaps that'll change in time. It seems that he's starting to develop some sort of feelings for his hated enemy. :)
I'm looking forward to see where you're going with this story, so I'll stick around for the ride. I definitely want to see how Goku's friends (and Vegeta, especially Vegeta) react to that situation. Probably will end in their deaths or a very painful experience.
Anywho, good chapter. I'm glad to see you haven't forsaken this piece, yet. I was beginning to worry.
Oh, so Brolly is still intending to go against his word? That's going to be interesting to see. Keeping Goku's wife and friends alive is probably the only thing stopping Goku from doing something stupid (like suicide or attacking Brolly). It seems he's still intent at unleashing his evil insidious mad plans. But perhaps that'll change in time. It seems that he's starting to develop some sort of feelings for his hated enemy. :)
I'm looking forward to see where you're going with this story, so I'll stick around for the ride. I definitely want to see how Goku's friends (and Vegeta, especially Vegeta) react to that situation. Probably will end in their deaths or a very painful experience.
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May 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My, how refreshing. It's nice to see a Brolly/Goku. That pairing is rare in itself and for some reason everyone always writes Brolly/Vegeta. <_< But yes, it's great to see someone writing a decent Brolly/Goku.
The story is good so far. I think everyone is being largely in character and I love Brolly's personality. "Do what I say or I break your jaw." >xD
I'm glad they didn't screw right away and I'm hoping you'll update more chapters and have the story develop. Nice start so far!
The story is good so far. I think everyone is being largely in character and I love Brolly's personality. "Do what I say or I break your jaw." >xD
I'm glad they didn't screw right away and I'm hoping you'll update more chapters and have the story develop. Nice start so far!
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May 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OoooOOOoooo~~~
What a nice story you've got going here! It's so refreshing to see a different pairing too! Broly x Goku is one of my favs! I can't wait for more. ^.^
What a nice story you've got going here! It's so refreshing to see a different pairing too! Broly x Goku is one of my favs! I can't wait for more. ^.^