rate_review Reviews

Omg.
I love it. I love everything about it! It is an really great story. I love the plot. I love it all.
I really like how "Goku" makes it sound like Vegeta hurt himself. I just hope they can work it out, and stay together.
I will follow this story, and check up almost everyday, to see if you updated.
Yaya. Keep going! :D

I like where this is going. Keep it up!

Liking this story :)

Wonder what happened to Goku whilst he was away, maybe he was brainwashed or had saiyan instincts awakened.

Glad you are going to have Vegeta fight it as I don't like seeing him weak, but I worry he is in for some pain and heartache :(

I’m really enjoying this story. Your storytelling is coherent and silky to read and the swell of Goku and Vegeta’s emotions feels rational, thoughtful and lucid. There’s an obvious strength to their relationship which you show being tested with articulate consideration. I did notice some small errors -‘spares’ instead of ‘spars’-, but nothing to worry too much over. I can tell by the story itself and by your AN that you’re putting a lot of thought into this story and I’m very curious to see what directions you’ll take it. Keep up the good work :)

Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.