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August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Needs... More... Of this. Like oh my god, I cannot believe how great this is. The whole background story and everything. And besides, Vegeta and Goku totally would be like that if things hadn't changed.
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June 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The only problem I'm having is that the chapters are so short. Hopefully that changes with time. I like the fact that I can't tell exactly where this is going since you seem so adament about the AU I'm curious to see what you do with the characters and their bios. If anthing I'd just like MORE
Thank you for writing
Trista
Thank you for writing
Trista
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June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and mysteries!!! I look forward to your next update!!
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June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
Just so you know, you don't have to use < > to italicize or to bolden anything any more, just put the emphasis there and it will show through when you post.
Aside from that, I look forward to the next chapter. You left it at such a cliffhanger! I'm interested to see what else is to come from your story, I think it has a strong beginning. I like the idea of Goku being the more experienced and rebellious fighter.
Trista
Just so you know, you don't have to use < > to italicize or to bolden anything any more, just put the emphasis there and it will show through when you post.
Aside from that, I look forward to the next chapter. You left it at such a cliffhanger! I'm interested to see what else is to come from your story, I think it has a strong beginning. I like the idea of Goku being the more experienced and rebellious fighter.
Trista