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September 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it! I'd love to read a longer story like this. Great job!
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March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very hot and also funny, perfect :)
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October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very, very hot and nice story! :D
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August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Damnnnn I loved it! Especially the ending bc usually in these one shots..they just have sex and that's it..so your ending was a breath of fresh air; also very sweet :) It is sooo fucking hot also! Love the hot Saiyan sex lol Awesome all around..very awesome! Loved how you had these two interacting bc that's how I would see them acting around each other after so many years also. So yea just wanted to say incredible job! :)
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August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was perfection. Sexy, hot, delicious, kinky, perfection. And Vegeta called him "Yamchop". That killed me. Hilarious.
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July 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice
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July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Woo! Now that's how Saiyans do it! :D That was intense! x) And it also reminded me of a doujinshi (sp?) that I saw on youtube. I think its called or by Sky Upside Down. I've only seen it about fifty times. X) However, from what I've gathered from it, the story is different and...its not as awkward hehe. Ugh, its too bad its a oneshot. >< You should definitely make another like it. :3 When I mean like it, I mean hot and sweaty goodness. :) Hehe anyway...you seem like an amazing writer, I hope you have more to come. ^^