rate_review Reviews

Very hot :)

I'd missed this. Lovely little one-shot between K/V. :) Liked the images your writing brought to my mind. Strangely enough, it was the surrounding environment that managed to be in full color.

Very good story! Well written, which is important. Also, while it's a moment in time kind of story you can feel a sense of time passed and it leaves you wondering many things. I enjoyed it.

Loved this line: He knew later on, Kakarot would feel the sting of his marks, and the thought of that pleased him, knowing that even though they never talked about it, Kakarot would feel his presence long after they went their separate ways, just like he did.

I liked it, but I will say it was short, I imagine so on purpose

Nice job. That was hot and conveyed the relationship nicely.