rate_review Reviews

Im trying to get a feel of your writing style by reading your first fic on here :-) . I didnt think too much about the pairing and i cant say i like goten but this fic is so delish. I like it very much. Is vegeta in your story OOC? i guess it depends on your universe. I think ill read the rest of your work to get a feel of your writing. This one i like very much. thanks!

Tbh, Vegeta/Goten was not a pairing I had paid much attention to but I realize after this that the age difference makes things ridiculously hot, as if the dom/sub doesn't do that enough. This was so well-written and flowed from each short chapter nicely. And though I like my stories dark, I did like the cuddling at the end. Now I'm off to read and hopefully keep up with your other works :)

This was too intriguing to pass up. It's amazing how such a rare pairing is made so believable. OMG this is hot!!