rate_review Reviews

What a deliciously dark story, loved every minute of it :)

Please, please do a sequel xx

This was a very interesting fic. It kept me darkly enthralled, and, with the huge cliffhanger that we've been left with, I really encourage you to write the sequel. Please, don't be a 'meany', lol
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Oh, I love the hole fic, I want to know how Kakarot will end D:

That was awe-strucking!! There's a part of me hoping that Vegeta bit Goku, fingers crossed. And if Vegeta was the one who bit him, then, surely, Vegeta will come back with a vengence. I don't know but I can just see that somehow Vegeta will break out of his imprisonment and search for his mate. I can almost hear him, singing, "Here kitty, kitty, kitty. Guess who's baaack?"

All I'm hoping is that the bite mark is not Brolli's. Oh, please don't it be Brolli!

Overall, the story is very climatic, powerful, and very, very sadistic! If I have ten hands, I'd give it a ten thumbs up!!

FINALLY YOU UPDATED!! I was beginning to lose hope. It is sad Gohan died , but it was necessary I suppose. Kinda feel bad for Vegeta in the end, but he had it coming... PLEASE DO A SEQUEL PLEASE! The sequel could have so much potential, so I implore you to highly consider it. Sequels can be scary, but I have faith in you :D

I love to know what happens next. I am so in love with this story and I have never been so hooked on it! I still come and check for a new chapter daily.

Please update more often!

Very Nice indeed, I liked the beginning, it was so dark, but as the chapters moved on it became more bright (Not a bad thing at all! Gives the story more character XD) I really enjoyed it yay keep it up!! I look forward to future chapters! excited for more

(Just finished reading the end of chapter 6.)

AAAAAAHHHH!! WHY DID YOU END IT THERE?!?!?!
Such a cliffhanger!!!! I'm really eager to find out what happens next. Gosh, Vegeta was SO close! THIS FREAKIN' CLOSE!!!!

Oooh I liked this chapter a lot....who made that noise? Gohan perhaps ? So looking forward to next chapter~

An interesting chapter o-o whoa Vegeta's a tsukai huh? Very interesting indeed.....kinda hoping Kaka would get preggers because I am evil like that but still very gorey and awesome!