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October 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
plz write moe
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February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, nappa sure is a foul, disgusting, loathsome dirty prick. He's obviously not going tobe a redeemable character, which, since there are only the 3 of them, I am beginning to feel like this is going to be another one of those gang rape stories. I don't care for Nappa or Radditz but if I have to read about them, I prefer to see those 2 as Vegeta's nannies. Though there hasn't been any interaction between the Saiyan girl and the trio, its not too late to make Nappa and Radditz the overprotective uncles..... That sounds better than slaughtering, woman-biting rapist.
There are quite a few sentences that need some work because they don't make a ton of sense and detract from the overall image. Just FYI so u can go back over them
There are quite a few sentences that need some work because they don't make a ton of sense and detract from the overall image. Just FYI so u can go back over them