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Ok, first of all, THANK YOU for finally updating this story. I have been waiting for an update since I read what you already had in two days.

Second, don't give them a lemon yet, they just got a date together. I haven't written a lot of yaoi stories (even though I LOVE THEM), but I know that when a couple that should be together finally does, you should build it up before they consummate their togetherness. Have them go on a few dates, add a few more feel ups and even have another little more intense make-out session like they did in Kakkerot's room. OOOOOOOOOOO maybe during one feel-up they are actually in public and have to hide because they almost get caught in a place they are not supposed to be, but Kakkerot keeps it up and Vegeta has to keep quiet and almost (if not does) cum.....

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! Now I'm getting excited on what could happen.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue soon!!!!! x0

Oh I'm glad there's been another update. Looks like things will finally be getting better for Vegeta, unless *gasp* this is just the calm before the storm! Guess I'll just have to wait patiently and see what happens. :P
I think it's fine as is when it comes to Vegeta's dads name, but giving him his name would work good too. I don't know XD

God I love all of your stories soooo much, but this is the one I always come back to the most. I really hope to see it updated soon. :)

I keep coming back to this story for a new chapter. I love how you portrays Vegeta as a lovestruck teen. And Goku- this suspense is killing me! Will he finally reveals his secret? Will Vegeta discover Goku's secret? Anyway, keep up a terrifically-awsome work! And, please continue this story! ;P

Neeee-uuuuu!! You can't stop there! Kakarotto was just starting to take the initiative to become closer to Vegeta! Ack! I am deeply in love with this story and just cannot wait for another update! There are so many things in this story that I love, and am also interested because I have not read many stories that didn't take place somewhere either completely rural, or in a big city. Little-town stories are few and far between, although it must be a well-off town to have two banks AND a movie theater. Though I'm curious exactly how big the school is. For a town of 150 it wouldn't be very many. Grades only about 10 large. (I've seen as few as 3.) Unless it takes in students from surrounding communities, then I can see it being bigger.
Love the OCs and character development. Attitudes and student interaction fits a small town setting. Even the unhappy homes and misfit families are believable. I can even understand Vegeta defending his dad even after all the abuse. His dad still cares, but drunks are not fun to be around and often don't even realize they hurt the ones closest to them the most. I even actually feel bad for Brolly now in recent chapters. Before I did not like him and was eagerly awaiting his beat down. But after he told Vegeta how he felt, and when he was the ONLY one to comfort Vegeta after attacking the principal.. Even Vegeta's friends didn't do that. If there was no other love interest, I'd almost be hoping they get back together. Ah, but that older brother is a d-bag.. So glad he got what was coming to him.
One thing I am wondering about is Kakarotto's condition. He told Vegeta his story about how his mother was murdured before he was born, then later when Vegeta was thinking about either why Kakarotto felt so hot or his eating habits (I forgot which one), he figured maybe it was his 'condition,' but I cannot remember mention of a condition before then. I do not know if I just missed it or if Vegeta just assumed Kakarotto has a condition from that experience. =/
Anyway, I LOVE this story. I do think currently it is my favorite story and the one I most look forward to updating. May the writing muse be strong with you! =D

nice! keep up the great work

I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

can't wait til you finish this fic. i wanna know wht Kakarrot is.

I really, really, really hate waiting. But I admit you did post quite a few chappies in the last few days... Therefore I will try to wait patiently. TRY, key word. Hope more is to come soon though. Glad to see bardok wants his son happy.

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

Still loving this story. I decided this story is my new obsession, so I expect updates. LOL, also I listened to that song. I kinda like it, I have to agree that it kinda did go with this chappie, It matched Vegeta to a T. Really good stuff. I like listening to the words, they have meaning. So good match up. I hope Goku makes up his mind with Vegeta and turns him, I'm wondering now if they are vampires or something. Can't wait for more.