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Really loving this story! It is heartbreaking what Vegeta is going through. Thanks of posting!

Just read this from beginning to end. I love it. Poor vegeta. HOpe goku will come to his aide. I love the whole damsel in distress thing going on here. More again soon please. More, soon, like now.

I ant thank you enough for the update. I hope u update again soon. I need to know if goku will go back to vegeta. Please please please. With lemons on top

Ok, the adorableness of their relationship is soooo frakking cute!

Thanks for all the new chapters, love them. : )

Thanks for all of the new chapters they were really good.

YAaaaay!!! Goku saves the day!!! WOnder how Vegeta reacts once he wakes up...

....wait, does Bardock notices the abuse marks Vegeta's dad left on him or has the wounds healed enough so he wouldn't noticed that the bruise is nothing more than an ordinary bruise?? (Am I making sense here?)

I really like this story. Great descriptions and emotional breakdown of characters. Hope you update soon!

I don't read school fic very often but... this sounds intriguing especially at the second chapter. I'm really curious to find out if Goku finally confronts Vegeta or vice versa. Heheh, I love Vegeta's buddies at school. Brolly, wow, he just --- ooh! He doesn't know when to a hint, does he?! I'm impressed by how well Vegeta is taking this, considering the abuse he takes at home and Brolly, his ex... I think. Feel the power and don't give up! This is awsome stuff going on here!!

Well, it *is* the most dull chapter you ever written, no offense but it certainly shows the character development and it also reveals how dull the town really is. I like how Vegeta doesn't hate his dad but blames him for his injuries, and how he doesn't want to lose his only family. I guess, what I'm attempting to say is Vegeta still care about his father, even after being abused by him for years. I also like the description you added to Vegeta's bruise and I really thought it was based from personal experience because it looks like a really bad bruise from abuse. Plus, I also like how Vegeta is in "stalker-mode" and I never read any fanfictions with Vegeta being a stalker before. That was a very nice touch! What else? I like how Vegeta and his friends all share the family problems. Vegeta's abusive dad, Sentaro's mom an unhappy smoker, and Noaru's sister a slut. It's like Vegeta, Sentaro, and Noaru became a tightly-knit family *because* of their family's problem and they do their best to deal the best way they know how. I think that's a rare trait a reader look for in a fanfic. Keep up a great work!