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I finally was able to read that last chapter, and I'm glad that I did. I hope you're getting around to writing! I'm waiting for the update-- I still think this story is great. You keep them so close to character and gave them such interesting and believable backgrounds. It's obvious, now, that they're getting closer than ever. I want to see what your ideas are for the rest of the story!

TristaML

I've been really wanting to read this last chapter but the upload is so misformatted that I can't get through it... not sure what happened and it may be my own electronic device... since my computer is out but I just thought I'd let you know this has never happened before.

Gosh what an exciting chapter and left on a cliffhanger!

I'm curious on what made Raditz react like that, is it something in Kakarot saliva that heals Vegeta but hurts others?

Really hope all three are ok even though Raditz is being a bitch.

I have so many questions right now?! D: I hope this gets updated soon. I want to see Vegeta get control of his werewolf form because of Kakarot. ;D

Good update! Perhaps use more paragraph breaks during the action scenes. And I am still trying to figure out the relationship Vegeta and Goku have. Are they just going to keep running for their freedom or are they ever going to face Bardock? Good action with the fighting and the tree jumping.

I keep going back to this story as well as your other stories for any more updates. I love to see this one continue, although I have to admit, I am a wee bit curious to discover what will happen to both Vegeta and Kakarott. I mean, Radditz found them and theeeen... kinda left a cliffhanger in there. I kept coming up with theories of what *might* happen to them. Will Radditz finally bring Kakarott to their father? WIll Vegeta go after them? Or will Vegeta go back to his home for a gameplan? Or will Vegeta starts attacking villages in a rage (although it sounds like an unlikely theory but who knows)? Will Vegeta and Kakarott finally fall in love???

Gak! So many ways, so many different endings!

Really enjoying this story, it's quite unusual and I love werewolves :)

Pretty good story line so far. I like adding the cub stage to a werewolf's life cycle. This seems believable and adorable at the same time. I can also completely envision Vegeta as the rogueish werewolf-hunter. Very dashing! And yet he still obviously needs the care and affection of another. My heart goes out to him.
It has been fun reading Vegeta and Kakarotto interact together and I am eagerly awaiting the moment it leads to something more. Also curious as to when/why Kakarotto makes his first kill and how it will effect him.
I'm also impressed with you looking up information to be more accurate to the story, down to the region and everything (Even gutting a deer-Kudos to you!). This helps immerse the reader into the story further. Although I had no idea they were originally in Russia until these more recent chapters. Looking forward to another update!
By the way... I am a redneck who rather enjoys these types of stories. -_^

Love it! Can't wait for more! VegetaxGoku plus awesome werewolves! nothing better than that!

Yeeeeeaaaaaaaay!!!! I love how this story is turning out! As much as I love to see how the two nemesis (the werewolves vs humans) war against each other, I'm curious and eager to read what happens to Kakarott and Vegeta. I love how you describe the half-breed as a cub, same as Kakarott. I wonder what will happens to those two now? Kakarott certainly cannot return to his home since his father vows to kill the half-breed and he will most certainly keep his son hidden from the world. Vegeta cannot return to his home either. Where would they go? Will there be a happy ending for these two cubs? Who knows. There is only one way to find out and that is to read what happens next. Keep doing an awsome job and thank you for writing this wonderful story! ;)