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Well now I'm want to know the same thing Kakarot wants to know.... what does Vegeta's true form look like!?! :O

Wow, I really enjoy this story, I am so captured in what is happening, I like that Vegeta is the God of War.

I think kakarotto, did the right thing and left, so he can keep his trust.... but i am not sure, because in the las paragraph it said that his cloths was all messy... but that could be that he dressed really fast and run out side.... know that i think about it it could also be that he did have sex with that girl, and then left...ARRRGGG... SO CONFUSING... THERE ARE MANY POSSIBILITIES... I HATE WHEN PEOPLE MESSED WITH MY HEAD.. I CAN'T THINK CLEAR AFTER THEY DO....

I just hope that you update soon.. i want to know what is going to happen next...

Ohh.. and what about the haunted castle? Well i think is Randitz... yeahh must be him... i wonder, what he is planning... wait is Randitz ¿ Right?


* sight* please update soon.. i think i am going to died... if kakarotto can't live without vegeta..welll i CAN'T live without reading this story.. is what keep me ALIVE...

Love it..... one of the best story there is.... i wish to read more..so please up date !!!!!.

I like how this story is progressing. Any relationship does have to be built, and that does take time. But, it is sad how much time is wasted in trivial thoughts and matters, when it could be used to create stronger and more worthwhile bonds and worlds. I believe genuine love is eternal, but rarely is it genuine; even rarer is it mutual. I like "Fated" and most or your stories. I hope you finish them all when you can. Thanks for writing.

This is the story I would love to see finished the most of all stories you've written. I love EVERYTHING about it. I come back each week to see if you updated this story. This story has shown much plots and promise. I love to see the relationship between Vegeta and Kakarott. Now that we know who Vegeta is, the real lies with Goku - will he accept Vegeta for who he is? Till then, please, please, please continue this story. You are an amazing writer and your uncanny talent to keep your readers in suspense is out of this world!

Please Finnish the story u love it

love this story, can't wait to see what happens next.

"peeks around*

This is such an awsome story. I would love to read some more! I also like to read more of Bark at the Moon, All There Is But Will Never Be, and The New Kid in Town. You're doing a great job with all of them. You are an awsome writer and thank you for writing these awsome stories!!

Very different and interesting story! I really do like the God concept and their difficulties in finding a mate. Thanks for posting!