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May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*le gasp!* Vegeta finally reveal himself! Looks like it was too much for Kakarott to handle, knowing who Vegeta is and what he does. I love how Kakarott still loves him but he thought it was a bad dream which made it so tragic to read! *sniff* Now I'm praying there's a happy ending in this story.
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May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAaahgghghh!!!! NOOOoo!!! Vegeta! Don't go! Epic, epic cliffhanger ever!!
Goodness! Those two have the greatest misunderstanding ever! I hope they resolve their issue in the next chapter. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Vegeta will listen to Kakarott's answer but knowing him, his personality, he would probably either not come to Kakarott for many months or he will not hear him out until Kakarott's in his proper age to make his decision. I'm definitely hoping that it's the former and not the latter. I mean, c'mon! Love wins all!!
Goodness! Those two have the greatest misunderstanding ever! I hope they resolve their issue in the next chapter. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Vegeta will listen to Kakarott's answer but knowing him, his personality, he would probably either not come to Kakarott for many months or he will not hear him out until Kakarott's in his proper age to make his decision. I'm definitely hoping that it's the former and not the latter. I mean, c'mon! Love wins all!!
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April 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*Peeps around*
Aw, no updates yet. I would LOVE to read another chapter. Keep up the awsome work, cuz you are doing a fantastic job!!!
Aw, no updates yet. I would LOVE to read another chapter. Keep up the awsome work, cuz you are doing a fantastic job!!!
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April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading the latest two chapters and I gotta say, Dang!! I thought you were developing the story and their characters very nicely and dang! Whew! I *LOVE* it when Vegeta saves the day, but man! A beautiful moment turns disasterous!!! Goodness. I'm glad you included this side story instead of arriving to a villiage (being destroyed). It really shows more of Vegeta's character and his concerns of Goku's well-being.
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April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a very intriguing story! Please update soon and thanks for posting!
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April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay!!! A new chapter!!
I thought it was really cute that Goku/Kakarott was being to stubborn to ask for help. And Vegeta seems more open to his fated one. It's a good character development going on throughout the chapter! Great job!!
My favorite part is Vegeta's agruing with a greedy saleman and Kakarott made a bargaining deal. That, and Vegeta waking up Kakarott. I thought it was really sad when none of Vegeta's former fated ones ever stayed with him, but then again, if this wasn't the case, then this story wouldn't be here, right? *wink, wink!*
Man, to go thousands of years without a fated one by his side... good thing Vegeta is too stubborn to give up! XD Looking forward to reading the next one!
I thought it was really cute that Goku/Kakarott was being to stubborn to ask for help. And Vegeta seems more open to his fated one. It's a good character development going on throughout the chapter! Great job!!
My favorite part is Vegeta's agruing with a greedy saleman and Kakarott made a bargaining deal. That, and Vegeta waking up Kakarott. I thought it was really sad when none of Vegeta's former fated ones ever stayed with him, but then again, if this wasn't the case, then this story wouldn't be here, right? *wink, wink!*
Man, to go thousands of years without a fated one by his side... good thing Vegeta is too stubborn to give up! XD Looking forward to reading the next one!
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April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love it but please make the chapters longer
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April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am hooked!!
This story is *so* good! I was instantly hooked since the first chapter and I am eager to read the next chapter! I love this story so much!! There is something almost indescribable about this second chapter. I can't place what it is exactly it is yet but let me tell you, it has made my day!! Tons of hugs!!!
This story is *so* good! I was instantly hooked since the first chapter and I am eager to read the next chapter! I love this story so much!! There is something almost indescribable about this second chapter. I can't place what it is exactly it is yet but let me tell you, it has made my day!! Tons of hugs!!!
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April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee!!! So happy to read another chapter!!! XD
Okay, now I'm a bit curious as to who Vegeta really is. We know he's not a demon. So, I'm guessing he could be ... Death? Wait, wait, wait, I know! I know! Vegeta's one of the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse! But which one? He could easily be Death, Famine, War or Conquest.
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Maybe he's is the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse combined into a single entity! No, wait.... I *do* know that Vegeta is connected to war and he doesn't stay in one place for very long. But he doesn't take away life... so that doesn't make him death. In a sense. And he also mentioned that he doesn't take part of the war but was involved somehow. So, that doesn't make him Conquest (which is connected with diseases) or Famine. But... does this make Vegeta "War"?
Ah~... maybe Vegeta's "sin?" GAAAH!!!! There's so many possibilities! Even in biblical references!! Ack! Just what is Vegeta???? Maybe I'm wrong about my theories but who knows? Perhaps I'll find that out in the next chapter or any of the upcoming chapters. Keep up a great work! You're awsome!!!
Okay, now I'm a bit curious as to who Vegeta really is. We know he's not a demon. So, I'm guessing he could be ... Death? Wait, wait, wait, I know! I know! Vegeta's one of the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse! But which one? He could easily be Death, Famine, War or Conquest.
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Maybe he's is the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse combined into a single entity! No, wait.... I *do* know that Vegeta is connected to war and he doesn't stay in one place for very long. But he doesn't take away life... so that doesn't make him death. In a sense. And he also mentioned that he doesn't take part of the war but was involved somehow. So, that doesn't make him Conquest (which is connected with diseases) or Famine. But... does this make Vegeta "War"?
Ah~... maybe Vegeta's "sin?" GAAAH!!!! There's so many possibilities! Even in biblical references!! Ack! Just what is Vegeta???? Maybe I'm wrong about my theories but who knows? Perhaps I'll find that out in the next chapter or any of the upcoming chapters. Keep up a great work! You're awsome!!!